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Non-fiction writing - The Great Wall of China

Can you complete your writing today all about the Great Wall of China?  Make sure that you read through your writing as you go. 

 

Remember, there is no need to send this writing in for feedback this week.  Thank you.

 

Editing or Proof-reading

Did you manage to use any of those interesting sentence starters in your writing?  Maybe you could read it through and add one or two if you forgot!  If you wish, you could watch Mr Smith's lesson about editing here:

https://www.bbc.co.uk/bitesize/articles/z3pxjsg